Investigation B
If passages A or B above were written for adults, the two sentences in each passage would probably be combined into one longer sentence. Try this out.
On the other hand, passage D uses one sentence to describe three separate things that learners do, which are all part of the notion of orientation. Passage C also covers several separate ideas. Try rewriting these more simply as several sentences.
Analysis
Look at the following clause from passage D: ‘the nature of the goals they form in order to perform it’. This way of writing is typical of academic material:
- The meaning centres on goals – the learners’ goals.
- ‘the nature of’ tells us that we are interested in what the goals are like.
- ‘they form’ explains what goals we are talking about – the goals that learners form.
- We could insert ‘that’ to make the meaning clearer – ‘the goals that they form’.
- Normally, we would say ‘they form goals’, but here ‘goals they form’ is used because this reversed word order is how descriptive clauses about a noun are constructed in English (but not in all languages).
- The phrase ‘in order to perform it’ tells us why the learners form goals.
- The word ‘goals’ has three separate phrases attached to it, making one whole complex clause around goals.
This complex clause is itself only one part of a longer sentence. Everybody has to learn how to understand language like this.
